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Punishment, For Earlier

Fandom: Dear Sister, I've Become a Blessed Maiden

Character(s) and/or Pairing(s): Theodorus Delambre/Umehiko Ishikawa

Rating: E

Word Count: 1005

Contents: PWP, Punishment, Orgasm Delay/Denial, Blow Jobs, Hand Jobs, Face-Fucking, Making Out, Canon Compliant, More Information In Authors Note

Notes: Done for [community profile] seasonofkink, prompt on the card was "Punishment/discipline". This would take part somewhere in the first 10-ish chapters of the manga, after Umehiko has that encounter with the plant monster in the garden.

So this is early on in their relationship. And their dynamic is written as how it was at that part of the story, before Theodorus treats Umehiko with more respect and Umehiko isn't enthused about becoming Theodorus' Blessed Maiden.

There is one line that does read as dubcon, but it's just that one line.

Summary: But as Umehiko was deep in thought over planning what to make later, he was interrupted by Theodorus, who made his way over to the counter. Sliding his hands onto his hips, and pressing their bodies together.

Whispering in his ear, “I’m running low on magic again…”

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In the kitchen, Umehiko was doing prep work. Looking over the array of various fantastical vegetables from the garden.

They all came in colors, shapes and sizes he didn’t even know they could be able to come in. It was interesting and very fun to compare the vegetables of Shen Mur to the ones back home on Earth. Learning the equivalents of the other, and planning how to use them in future dishes.

But as Umehiko was deep in thought over planning what to make later, he was interrupted by Theodorus, who made his way over to the counter. Sliding his hands onto his hips, and pressing their bodies together.

Whispering in his ear, “I’m running low on magic again…”

And as Theodorus directed his gaze towards him, combined with his touch— Like clockwork, Umehiko was weak at the knees. His breath began to hitch, every inch of his body beginning to tremble.

All of his body heated up as his heart began to pound in his chest.

He barely did anything so far, but he was already aching for Theodorus to relieve him from his rapidly growing erection.

Theodorus’ hands slid under his shirt, fingers lightly caressing his chest. A finger cheekily teasing a nipple, rubbing and stroking it. A smirk made its way to his lips as Umehiko gasped and whined.

Umehiko still couldn’t stand how Theodorus had this effect on him, but at the same time it felt so good… Umehiko desperately craved more, arching into his touch. Heat pooled up inside his belly. His mind was already slipping into a haze from the pleasure of Theodorus’ touch, and the effects it had on him.

“Even though you learned your lesson back in my garden, I still think you need a bit more punishment…”

Flicking the nipple he was teasing, relishing in his maiden’s response. Then continuing to circle the tip of his finger around it, pulling up Umehiko’s shirt and teasingly licking the other one.

“Mmn—!” Umehiko’s body writhed as he moaned, his brain already short circuiting. And craving more.

Umehiko got so loud, and so easily. But it was extremely fun to coax those noises out of him. How Umehiko sounded in the throes of pleasure was like music to his ears. Theodorus could never get enough of it.

Pinning him against the nearby wall, Theodorus kissed and bit around Umehiko’s neck and collarbones, leaving hickies that could easily last for several days. Leaving his mark on what was his. Grinding up against him, Umehiko whimpered and arching up against him. He could already feel just how close he was to coming.

But right as he was about to come, Theodorus stopped.

Face flushed, and panting Umehiko spoke up. “…Huh?”

“As punishment, I’m not letting you come.” Another smirk crossed Theodorus’ face, “Unless you can think of a way to persuade me? Hm…?”

Dammit!

If Umehiko didn’t desperately need to orgasm, and had to rely on the touch of this guy to get it, he would have absolutely left the room already. But being his Blessed Maiden, this was the only way to get relief.

Sinking to his knees, he looked up at Theodorus with eyes hazy from lust. Hands reaching towards his pants.

Without a word, Theodorus slid down his pants with that same smirk. Stroking his head as Umehiko began to take hold of his cock and lap at the head. His tongue licking in circles. “Good boy.”

His soft lips parted as he put his cock into his mouth, Umehiko got into a rhythm. Licking from base to tip, then taking in the entire length. Looking up towards Theodorus as he continued to suck.

And it was so fucking hot, Theodorus could barely keep his composure. Filled with a strong desire to fuck Umehiko senseless, and if he wasn’t giving him a bit of punishment he’d do that right this instant.

He let out a groan, gripping Umehiko’s hair as he began to thrust into his mouth. The moans he let out as Theodorus continued to thrust only added further stimulation.

It didn’t take much longer for Theodorus to come right into Umehiko’s mouth. Who swallowed it while looking up at him right in his eyes.

Caressing his head, Theodorus smirked once again. “Good boy… Now get off your knees.”

Umehiko obeyed, and promptly Theodorus began to grab his cock and pump it. Going at a rapid pace. It felt amazing. Hips arching into his touch, and being so pent up from earlier he could barely last much longer.

Moaning loudly as he came, Umehiko then slid onto the wall. Panting as he came to from the orgasm.

Theodorus still had that smug look on his face as he stroked Umehiko’s chin. Making him blush. “I can see it in your eyes, you still want more.”

And he was absolutely correct. Umehiko still desperately needed more and was far from finished. Theodorus really must have used a lot of magic earlier for him to be in a state like this…

He leaned in very close, their faces were almost touching. Theodorus’ hot breath hit right up against his skin. And his hand slid down, now caressing his neck. Umehiko’s heart nearly skipped a beat as his cheeks became warm again.

The pair began to kiss, Theodorus sucked his bottom lip. Then slid his tongue in. Beginning to kiss roughly as they found a rhythm.

Umehiko forgot about everything as the kissing progressed and continued to heat up. Everything came to a standstill. All he could focus on was just how good Theodorus made him feel.

When they came up for air, Theodorus gave Umehiko another smirk. Grinding up against him as he pressed him into the wall. Enjoying how he was trying to bite back a moan, but could barely keep himself quiet.

Languidly rubbing his thumb on a nipple again. He relished in Umehiko’s reactions, “Tell me what you want.”

There was so much he needed, and right now— Umehiko didn’t even know where to start.


End Notes: Ever start reading an entire BL manga because the two guys reminds you of your fave guys from something else? And then get emotions over it and catch up with said manga in 12 hours? That's how this fic was made.

That is the power of two leads that remind me of Ankh and Eiji. (Especially Ankh when put next to Theodorus.) Anyways expect some more fics of these two in the future because I have emotions over them!!! If you want a post where I talk about this manga a bit in a rec post, here it is on my DW.

If you've actually read this manga, hopefully these two sound in character! It's my first time writing them and I gotta get the hang of things.

I need someone to join me. For the time being I am alone with having emotions over Dear Sister, I've Become a Blessed Maiden, and I need to yell about it! (Also what sucks about how commas separate tags means I had to remove them for the fandoms section, both for the English version and the Japanese version which is: 前略、お兄ちゃんは聖女になりました。)


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